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Against The Odds Ch.5As soon as we entered, screams came from the crowd. "STELLA! STELLA!" And of course, "BRANDON! BRANDON!". We smiled and waved to the crowd and the roared louder. Someone showered us with flowers, but we weren't the only ones getting all the attention... District One of course, but we noticed two was being praised just as much. They did look flawless in there assorted stong outfits. Feeling horribly jealous, I blew a kiss and tried to get their attention. Once they did, the whole crowd was in a rave chanting, "DISTRICT FOUR!! DISTICT FOUR!" I looked at Brandon and his eyes said we were going to be fine. After going around a few times, we stope

Against The Odds Ch.4"What was that?!?" asked Brandon with a horrid look. We were walking back to our cabins when I felt his grip on my shoulders. He flipped me around.
"What was that?!?" I giggled.
"Don't play around Jackson... I'll kill you." he hissed.
"Mmm, so you jump on me for my talents? Then threat to kill me?" I said with a sly face.
"No..." he blushed.
"Really, come on. Finnick asked me if I had any weapon talents. It's not like I wanted to just say, 'Yeah, I do. Chucking knives at targets an hitting them. Fun right?'. Wouldn't you have shown him yours? What is it again? Spears? Hand to hand? Filped me across the table eh?" I smiled. He smiled bac

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Jasper in a field.
SLEEPING
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Submitted on: December 27, 2011
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Critique by ~laurenthewolfeh Dec 27, 2011, 11:30:43 AM

This is beautiful. The sun is very, very pretty. I like how, as the sun goes wider, the density goes lower. And the flare, oh yes. Very clever. The tail is fluffy, maybe a little too fluffy. But it's still cute. he colors of the leaves are very unique. I like how you made them colorful. That's what I like about your arwork. Unlike others, you try to make your pictures a little colorful. That's a good thing.~ Well, it seems you know just what I would like. Your pictures give me this warm, fuzzy feeling inside. This one espescially. It's so peaceful.

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